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22 March 2008 @ 02:25 am
[Ficlet] Paintstripper (1-hour fic challenge)  
For my first attempt at the 1-hour calendar porn fic challenge, 22/3/08! And here's everyone else who participated:
alissa | bloodybrilliant | elyndys | iverin | jackoweskla | jadedfrenzy | ky_rin | mousapelli | pearljemz | peroxidepest17 | thawrecka | tinyangl | tokyostory

Title: Paintstripper
Pairing: Subaru/Yasu
Porn?: Yes
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction.
Notes: Based on Yasu's calendar picture with all the paint. (Not the cow one. I draw the line at cowslash.) I didn't quite finish it at the time, but I put another few lines on the end afterwards and tidied it up. :]


They run into each other in the studio corridor. Subaru stops in his tracks and stares.

Yasu looks down at himself, smiles back at Subaru. “I’m was going to go have a shower, but I think I might need some paint-stripper,” he jokes.

“Don’t,” says Subaru, very seriously. Yasu knows that look, and he doesn’t even question when Subaru grabs his wrist and pulls him down the hall, just jogs to keep up.

Yasu’s glad they’ve used this studio a lot of times before, they know it so well that Subaru can find that small dressing room that no-one ever uses. Probably because they know what it’s been used for in the past.

Subaru pushes Yasu up against the wall and kisses him right away, paint and all. It must be non-toxic, for him to be able to use it on his skin, but it can’t taste very good, Yasu thinks, though Subaru doesn’t seem to care.

“What is it with you and drawing on people?” Subaru murmurs between kisses. “You loved having a go at me too.” He’s working on Yasu’s belt; of course, Yasu never put his shirt back on after the photoshoot, and Subaru kisses messily down his neck and licks along his collarbone and mouths at his nipples.

Yasu leans his head back against the wall, gripping Subaru’s shoulders. He’s breathing hard already, he loves this so-sudden assault, the way the heat is suddenly all there in a rush, and he wants it so, so much. “I remembered how hot you looked then,” he pants. “You looked rough, like a punk. I wanted you to do what you wanted to me.” His voice is barely a whisper – Subaru’s got his hand in his pants, his palm hot against Yasu’s dick.

“Like I am now?” Subaru murmurs, his voice low and smoky. He pushes Yasu’s trousers down round his thighs. “Turn round,” he says, and Yasu groans as Subaru takes his hand off his cock.

He turns to face the wall, bringing his hands up to lean on, resting his painted cheek against them. “Hurry,” he whispers, and feels Subaru fingers stroke down his spine, making him shudder and moan and arch his back, desperate for Subaru’s touch. He hears the clink of Subaru’s belt, shivers at a kiss right on a sensitive point at the back of his neck, then the next thing he feels is Subaru pushing into him, slick, slow but firm. He bites his lip, squeezes his eyes shut, wanting Subaru to be in him already, wanting to feel him move and fuck him, deep and fast.

He loves the feeling of Subaru pressed against his back, loves how hot he is, even through his shirt – Subaru’s as desperate as he is, he’s not taken any of his clothes off, and Yasu tries to picture how they must look. It’s so good he’s already sliding a hand down his own chest, his painted hand, wrapping it round his cock and stroking slowly, drawing it out.

Yasu can feel Subaru breathing close to his ear. “I’m not gonna go easy on you,” he whispers, predatory, like he can’t control himself. Yasu is glad.

“Don’t, please don’t,” he moans, and though Subaru knows he means to go for it as hard as he likes, he thinks that anyone hearing might wonder if Yasu was asking to be let go. But there’s no-one to hear, and if they were to see, they’d know what he means.

Subaru fucks him in short, fast thrusts, gripping his hips and biting at his neck and getting deep into him, and Yasu relishes every second, gasping and moaning every time Subaru’s hips meet his. He jerks himself off with long strokes, firm but not rough, just like Subaru’s moving in him. He was wrong, Subaru’s not out of control at all, and he’s got Yasu completely under his control too, making him writhe and rock back against Subaru. Subaru’s pace is so fast and Yasu’s caught up in it, all he can think about is how badly he needs to come, because he’s drawn so tight and so tense and so full that it’s going to be almost too much.

Subaru puts his arms round him, holding him still, and Yasu whines, part-frustrated, part because he’s so close, he just needs a little more to tip him over – and Subaru’s shaking against him, pushing into him harder and deeper, and then Yasu feels him come, wet and slick and so hot, and Yasu rubs his thumb over the head of his cock and that’s enough, he cries out in relief as he comes all over the pink and black and green caked on his hand.

He can feel Subaru's breathing calming down as he holds him close. Yasu likes it when Subaru stays in him afterwards, enjoys the feeling of them both being too spent and sated to move. He rests his head against the wall, closes his eyes, smiles.

"I think I needed that," he murmurs.

"I'm always happy to be of service," Subaru says smartly.

Yasu chuckles. "That's why I keep coming back," he says. He gives a satisfied sigh as Subaru finally pulls out of him, and takes the tissue Subaru offers him to wipe off his hand. "Oh!" he says, half-amused. "The paint's coming off too, look."

Subaru looks at him for a moment before saying, deadpan, "In that case wait till we get home, I've got a great suggestion for cleaning your face."


END

I was going to put in a coda that involved Subaru's post-apocalyptic photo, but a) I couldn't think of it in the same way after what iverin did ;_; (^_~) and b) I thought that wrapped it up quite nicely and I was too impressed with my own genius. XD
 
 
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Alissatheotheralissa on March 22nd, 2008 02:47 am (UTC)
ask;alks;lakfjsl;fkjds <--- that is my COHERENT response. XD

Parsnip: 2 - ffyunieparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 03:12 pm (UTC)
♥ Hehehe, I like eliciting that response! ^_~

BTW, I added a few extra sentences and wrapped it up now! ;)
airairo: subaru and yasu - :D :Dairairo on March 22nd, 2008 08:50 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ I love you and your filthy mind~

And I feel I should keymash again for good measure alksd;laksdf :D
Kitayama might be taking a picture of this: hopelessly deadlockedmousapelli on March 22nd, 2008 03:15 am (UTC)
awww, cute! and hot!
Parsnip: 3 - kikonsparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 03:13 pm (UTC)
Hehe, just like Yasu! ;D Thank you very much! :D
All aboard the failbus!iverin on March 22nd, 2008 04:48 am (UTC)
A+ my dear. You got straight to the good stuff. 8DDDD Heeeee.

What can I say, I've been needing some SUBASSAN lately~~~
Parsnip: 5 - happigraphicsparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 03:14 pm (UTC)
Yeah, I made myself cut to the chase instead of messing about with details like foreplay, lol. And I enjoyed it immensely. >D

I'm always needing more Subassan. @_@ BTW, I added a few more sentences today so now it's complete! >;D
All aboard the failbus!iverin on March 22nd, 2008 07:04 pm (UTC)
Hey who needs foreplay with those two? Their entire existence is foreplay.

WOO.

...sf hajkldsf GOOD ENDING BUT SKJDHKSHDLKJHSFLKJS EVERYONE ALREADY HATES ME FOR MY FIC NOW I'M MAKING PEOPLE NOT BE ABLE TO WRITE?

....what kind of horrible person am i T_T

Edited at 2008-03-22 07:08 pm (UTC)
Parsnipparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 07:10 pm (UTC)
Nonono I'm just teasing! Your story was awesome! ♥ It's more that I wish I could come up with something that inventive! Only mine would just be porn. XD
All aboard the failbus!iverin on March 22nd, 2008 07:15 pm (UTC)
XDDDD But your porn is A+ my dear. There isn't enough good K8 porn that is as well-characterized as it is titillating. You fill a great need in the fandom, and for that I LOVE YOU EVEN MORE.

Though I do wish people wouldn't insult my fics on comments for other fics, LOL.
La: subaru yasu heartpashoshi on March 22nd, 2008 05:28 am (UTC)
I second Alissa's marvelously coherent response. Akjdfglkdfjghlkdfjghlkfgjh.
Parsnip: 6 - miritxuparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 03:16 pm (UTC)
:D :D :D BTW, in case you're interested I added an ending today, which I'm sure is technically cheating but something I thought was particularly hilarious popped into my head. XD
Def Leopard's one-armed drummerbloodybrilliant on March 22nd, 2008 06:20 am (UTC)
hfasjdflkajsdflkjasdflkasjdfak

I SAY THE SAME. LKSJfdlkjferioajslkdja
Parsnip: 5 - happigraphicsparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 03:17 pm (UTC)
Yay! Three keysmashes, I'm very proud! :D Also, I cheated a little and added a few sentences to finish it off today, in case you're interested! ^_~
His pencil box is dirty!: Subassan <3 food.this_is_cd on March 23rd, 2008 01:10 am (UTC)
kljhdfjkhasdkjfha GUH. I LOVE IT. *_* SO SO NICE. VERY nicely ended and alksdfjaslkdf omg lol face cleaning solution *_* YES PLZ. XDDD
( k o n ) : 魂 : half of a dubious pear: すばる * unintentional sexy.koneho on March 22nd, 2008 07:04 am (UTC)
GOD OMG WHAT
Parsnipparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 03:18 pm (UTC)
...Is that a good OMG what? ^^'
( k o n ) : 魂 : half of a dubious pear: 安田 * oh. my. god.koneho on March 22nd, 2008 11:14 pm (UTC)
That was the most coherent thing I could type in the middle of the night after READING SUBARU/YASUDA SEX, I am sorry, it was totally a good thing, complete with the same expression Yasuda has in my icon. Like the "OMG SO GOOD" kind of OMG. ♥
About 90%.: Afro. - sukebeconselyndys on March 22nd, 2008 11:16 pm (UTC)
Oh good! :D In fact, excellent! :D :D I'm happy you enjoyed it so much! Yay!
アセちゃんnira_chan on March 22nd, 2008 03:25 pm (UTC)
I think I love you~~ <3333
Parsnipparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 03:30 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥ I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
Tai: Yasuda shota - 818 (the okama)sisterjune on March 22nd, 2008 05:13 pm (UTC)
FOWWJ HOT!!!!!! Seriously ely your porn never fails to bring on the heat. I'm not particularly turned on by paint but this was still very very good. Also I wish had an icon of that yasu calender pic to use now. ;_;

I feel sad that only 4 people in this challenge did K8 fics. lol i love how 3 of them were porn and 1 of them was iverin's story and was perfectly HORRIFYING. I suppose no one can accuse her of not being original. XD
all the K8 fics were hard though it's impossible for me to pick a favorite but if i was doing a judging competition i might just give to iverin for managing to come up with the most fucked up stories ever. I mean remember the lips fic she wrote? *shudders* LOL i'm sorry i talked so much about someone else. XD I felt like being chatty. ^^; also I WANT GIRL YOKO ALREADY STOP DEPRIVING ME YOU CRUEL VIPER. o_o
Parsnipparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 05:29 pm (UTC)
LOL I didn't think anyone could be turned on by paint, but in that photo Yasu does look smoking. :9 Glad you enjoyed the pr0n! :D

I too was a bit a sad about the lack of K8 fic. :/ I guess it's just the corner of fandom involved - which means we need to influence more people! >D Hahaha and don't worry, I am planning to work on the last 3 girl fics over the next week, while I'm on holiday!
Taisisterjune on March 22nd, 2008 05:58 pm (UTC)
You'd be surprised my friend, at what can turn on some people. AT THIS YOUNG AGE, I'VE ALREADY HEARD TOO MUCH. *weeps softly*

*ahem* anyway XD YAY FOR THE GIRLFIC! :D and my spring break is going to end in two days...1 and a 1/2. ;_;
anamuananamuan on March 22nd, 2008 10:31 pm (UTC)
I'm also quite impressed with your genius, I have to say.
Parsnipparsnipchip on March 22nd, 2008 10:36 pm (UTC)
;D Thank you very much!
molkita: YaSubamolkita on March 23rd, 2008 04:09 pm (UTC)
Oh how I love this ♥

The world needs more good Subassan porn like this one, I tell you!
Thanks for sharing.
Hot sicka than y0' average: Kanjani8 - Eito circleswtjemz on March 24th, 2008 03:26 am (UTC)
um...YES. SO MUCH YES.

A;FJAS;KFJA;DFKJA;SLF. SUBARU/YASU SMUT IS SO AWESOME.

Thanks for joining us and writing!!! We need more Eito fans participating in the challenges. Every time I try, I always fail. XD I think it just means I need more Eito fans on my LJ or something.
whited_79whited_79 on March 24th, 2008 09:27 am (UTC)
I think this is just awesome! did you catch a little Subassan action on SCP? I've missed those!
kaolachan on April 15th, 2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
waou it's so hot!
this is the first subassan fan-fiction that i read, and i really enjoy it *O*
do you write other subassan fic like this one?
i thing, i'm gonna check your lj xD
thanks for sharing ^^
the_trishness: Eito OTPthe_trishness on August 14th, 2009 05:08 am (UTC)
*is a year late*

HOT DAMN, that was hot!!! <3

I love your combo of humor, cuteness and SEX. It makes me happy. :3

Subaru looks at him for a moment before saying, deadpan, "In that case wait till we get home, I've got a great suggestion for cleaning your face." = BEST LINE EVER. WIN. TWO THUMBS UP. I'm still LOLing over here.